T1 Writing

We are learning to...

·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced

Criteria:

·      have an opening statement that tells who, what and where

·      write the events in the order they happened

·      have a conclusion or personal response

My Cousin

I went to my cousin's house a long time ago. I beat my cousin and he is a big boy. He might be a big boy . He might be 10 years old and the other boy might be 9 years old. 

I am a lot smaller than them because I am 7 years old and they are a lot bigger than us.

Teacher comment:

You have tried hard to write your ideas in order.

Next step:

Think carefully of the whole sentence before you write it.